Here's my blog critique of Laura Diamond's sample. Thanks to Laura for volunteering. Feel free to add to my crit, agree with it or disagree. Reading is subjective, and to a certain degree, so is editing. See, I told you that was my new mantra.
Below is my detailed critique. Please select FULL SCREEN to view, then once the document is open RIGHT CLICK to ZOOM and view the comments.
Blog Crit of TALENT'S_BLOOD by Laura Diamond
Please note that the text and critique are only posted on this blog and not on a true public forum. Next Wednesday, I'll critique again.