Blog Crit of UNTIL THE END by Danielle Hess

Here's my blog critique of UNTIL THE END by Danielle Hess. Thanks to Danielle for volunteering. Feel free to add to my crit, agree with it or disagree. Reading is subjective, and to a certain degree, so is editing.

Below is my detailed critique. Please select FULL SCREEN to view, then once the document is open RIGHT CLICK to ZOOM and view the comments.

Danielle Hess -Blog Crit of UNTIL THE END


Thanks to all who've volunteered to share their work on my blog. I'm a professional editor. If anyone is interested in having their query, synopsis, and/or manuscript edited, I can help. I'm also a writing coach, so I can teach you how to edit your own manuscript. Plus, I offer one-on-one courses on GMCs (goals, motivations, and conflicts), and am now teaching an online group course called Hook, Line, and Sinker: How to Hook Readers and Reel Them In. Contact me for more information or visit my site.

Lynnette Labelle
http://www.labelleseditorialservices.com/

Blog Crit of Jenn Maxwell's GIVING UP THE GHOST

Here's my blog critique of GIVING UP THE GHOST by Jenn Maxwell. Thanks to Jenn for volunteering. Feel free to add to my crit, agree with it or disagree. Reading is subjective, and to a certain degree, so is editing.

Below is my detailed critique. Please select FULL SCREEN to view, then once the document is open RIGHT CLICK to ZOOM and view the comments.

Blog Crit of Giving_Up_the_Ghost by Jenn Maxwell

Thanks to all who've volunteered to share their work on my blog. I'm a professional editor. If anyone is interested in having their query, synopsis, and/or manuscript edited, I can help. I'm also a writing coach, so I can teach you how to edit your own manuscript. Plus, I offer one-on-one courses on the craft of writing, and am now teaching an online group course called Hook, Line, and Sinker: How to Hook Readers and Reel Them In. Contact me for more information or visit my site.


Lynnette Labelle
http://www.labelleseditorialservices.com/

Blog Crit of A TROLL WIFE'S TALE by Suzi McGowen

Here's my blog critique of A TROLL WIFE'S TALE by Suzi McGowen. Thanks to Suzi for volunteering. Feel free to add to my crit, agree with it or disagree. Reading is subjective, and to a certain degree, so is editing.

Below is my detailed critique. Please select FULL SCREEN to view, then once the document is open RIGHT CLICK to ZOOM and view the comments.

Blog Crit of Troll Wife by Suzi McGowen


The text and critique are only posted on this blog and not on a true public forum. Next Wednesday, I'll critique again.

If you're interested in a critique, send your first 500 words to me at lynnette_labelle at hotmail dot com. Please put "Blog Critique" in the subject, so I know it's not spam. Let me know the genre of the sample and whether or not I have permission to use your name. There are a few people still waiting for crits, so your piece will be added to the queue. I'll let you know roughly how long it'll be once I receive your sample.

Please note: I'm only accepting one sample per person at this time.

Thanks to all who've volunteered to share their work on my blog. I'm a professional editor. If anyone is interested in having their query, synopsis, and/or manuscript edited, I can help. I'm also a writing coach, so I can teach you how to edit your own manuscript. Plus, I offer one-on-one courses on the craft of writing. Contact me for more information or visit my site.

Lynnette Labelle
http://www.labelleseditorialservices.com

Blog Crit of TATTOO MY HEART by Suzie Quint

Here's my blog critique of TATTOO MY HEART by Suzie Quint. Thanks to Suzie for volunteering. Feel free to add to my crit, agree with it or disagree. Reading is subjective, and to a certain degree, so is editing.

Below is my detailed critique. Please select FULL SCREEN to view, then once the document is open RIGHT CLICK to ZOOM and view the comments.


Blog Crit of Tattoo My Heart by Suzie Quint

The text and critique are only posted on this blog and not on a true public forum. Next Wednesday, I'll critique again.

If you're interested in a critique, send your first 500 words to me at lynnette_labelle at hotmail dot com. Please put "Blog Critique" in the subject, so I know it's not spam. Let me know the genre of the sample and whether or not I have permission to use your name. There are a few people still waiting for crits, so your piece will be added to the queue. I'll let you know roughly how long it'll be once I receive your sample.

Please note: I'm only accepting one sample per person at this time.

Thanks to all who've volunteered to share their work on my blog. I'm a professional editor. If anyone is interested in having their query, synopsis, and/or manuscript edited, I can help. I'm also a writing coach, so I can teach you how to edit your own manuscript. Plus, I offer one-on-one courses on the craft of writing. Contact me for more information or visit my site.

Lynnette Labelle
http://www.labelleseditorialservices.com/

Blog Crit of HIDDEN IN SHADOWS by Nicole Zoltack

Here's my blog critique of HIDDEN IN SHADOWS by Nicole Zoltack. Thanks to Nicole for volunteering. Feel free to add to my crit, agree with it or disagree. Reading is subjective, and to a certain degree, so is editing.

Below is my detailed critique. Please select FULL SCREEN to view, then once the document is open RIGHT CLICK to ZOOM and view the comments.

Blog Crit of Hidden in Shadows by Nicole Zoltack

The text and critique are only posted on this blog and not on a true public forum. Next Wednesday, I'll critique again.

If you're interested in a critique, send your first 500 words to me at lynnette_labelle at hotmail dot com. Please put "Blog Critique" in the subject, so I know it's not spam. Let me know the genre of the sample and whether or not I have permission to use your name. There are a few people still waiting for crits, so your piece will be added to the queue. I'll let you know roughly how long it'll be once I receive your sample.

Please note: I'm only accepting one sample per person at this time.

Thanks to all who've volunteered to share their work on my blog.  I'm a professional editor.  If anyone is interested in having their query, synopsis, and/or manuscript edited, I can help.  I'm also a writing coach, so I can teach you how to edit your own manuscript.  Plus, I offer one-on-one courses on the craft of writing.  Contact me for more information or visit my site.

Lynnette Labelle
http://www.labelleseditorialservices.com/

Blog Critique of THE ELDER by Angela McCallister

Here's my blog critique of THE ELDER by Angela McCallister. Thanks to Angela for volunteering. Feel free to add to my crit, agree with it or disagree. Reading is subjective, and to a certain degree, so is editing.


Below is my detailed critique. Please select FULL SCREEN to view, then once the document is open RIGHT CLICK to ZOOM and view the comments.

Blog Crit of the Elder by Angela McCallister

The text and critique are only posted on this blog and not on a true public forum. Next Wednesday, I'll critique again.

If you're interested in a critique, send your first 500 words to me at lynnette_labelle at hotmail dot com. Please put "Blog Critique" in the subject, so I know it's not spam. Let me know the genre of the sample and whether or not I have permission to use your name. There are a few people still waiting for crits, so your piece will be added to the queue. I'll let you know roughly how long it'll be once I receive your sample.

Please note: I'm only accepting one sample per person at this time.

Thanks to all who've volunteered to share their work on my blog.
 
Lynnette Labelle
http://www.labelleseditorialservices.com/

Blog Crit of PLANNING FOR LOVE by Christi Barth

Here's my blog critique of PLANNING FOR LOVE by Christi Barth. Thanks to Christi for volunteering. Feel free to add to my crit, agree with it or disagree. Reading is subjective, and to a certain degree, so is editing.

Below is my detailed critique. Please select FULL SCREEN to view, then once the document is open RIGHT CLICK to ZOOM and view the comments.


Blog Crit of Planning for Love by Christi Barth


The text and critique are only posted on this blog and not on a true public forum. Next Wednesday, I'll critique again.


If you're interested in a critique, send your first 500 words to me at lynnette_labelle at hotmail dot com. Please put "Blog Critique" in the subject, so I know it's not spam. Let me know the genre of the sample and whether or not I have permission to use your name. There are a few people still waiting for crits, so your piece will be added to the queue. I'll let you know roughly how long it'll be once I receive your sample.


Please note: I'm only accepting one sample per person at this time.

 Thanks to all who've volunteered to share their work on my blog.

Blog Crit of SARIM'S STORY by Tamika Spruill

Here's my blog critique of SARIM'S STORY. Thanks to Tamika Spruill for volunteering. Feel free to add to my crit, agree with it or disagree. Reading is subjective, and to a certain degree, so is editing.

Below is my detailed critique. Please select FULL SCREEN to view, then once the document is open RIGHT CLICK to ZOOM and view the comments.

Blog Crit of Sarim's Story by Tamika Spruill


The text and critique are only posted on this blog and not on a true public forum. Next Wednesday, I'll critique again.

If you're interested in a critique, send your first 500 words to me at lynnette_labelle at hotmail dot com. Please put "Blog Critique" in the subject, so I know it's not spam. Let me know the genre of the sample and whether or not I have permission to use your name. There are a few people still waiting for crits, so your piece will be added to the queue. I'll let you know roughly how long it'll be once I receive your sample.

Please note: I'm only accepting one sample per person at this time.


Thanks to all who've volunteered to share their work on my blog.

Blog Crit of IN THE DUKE'S BED

Here's my blog critique of IN THE DUKE'S BED sample. Thanks to the anonymous volunteer. Feel free to add to my crit, agree with it or disagree. Reading is subjective, and to a certain degree, so is editing.

Below is my detailed critique. Please select FULL SCREEN to view, then once the document is open RIGHT CLICK to ZOOM and view the comments.

Blog Crit of in the Duke's Bed by Anon
 
The text and critique are only posted on this blog and not on a true public forum. Next Wednesday, I'll critique again.

If you're interested in a critique, send your first 500 words to me at lynnette_labelle at hotmail dot com. Please put "Blog Critique" in the subject, so I know it's not spam. Let me know the genre of the sample and whether or not I have permission to use your name. There are a few people still waiting for crits, so your piece will be added to the queue. I'll let you know roughly how long it'll be once I receive your sample.

Please note: I'm only accepting one sample per person at this time.


Thanks to all who've volunteered to share their work on my blog.

Critique of Stephanie Haefner's Beginning

Here's my blog critique of Stephanie Haefner's sample. Thanks to Stephanie for volunteering. Feel free to add to my crit, agree with it or disagree. Reading is subjective, and to a certain degree, so is editing.

Below is my detailed critique. Please select FULL SCREEN to view, then once the document is open RIGHT CLICK to ZOOM and view the comments.
Blog Crit of Spellbound by Stephanie Haefner


The text and critique are only posted on this blog and not on a true public forum.  Next Wednesday, I'll critique again. 

If you're interested in a critique, send your first 500 words to me at lynnette_labelle at hotmail dot com.  Please put "Blog Critique" in the subject, so I know it's not spam.  Let me know the genre of the sample and whether or not I have permission to use your name.  There are a few people still waiting for crits, so your piece will be added to the queue.  I'll let you know roughly how long it'll be once I receive your sample. 

Please note: I'm only accepting one sample per person at this time.

Thanks to all who've volunteered to share their work on my blog.

Critique of Terri Tiffany's Beginning

Here's my blog critique of Terri Tiffany's sample. Thanks to Terri for volunteering. Feel free to add to my crit, agree with it or disagree. Reading is subjective, and to a certain degree, so is editing.


Below is my detailed critique. Please select FULL SCREEN to view, then once the document is open RIGHT CLICK to ZOOM and view the comments.


Blog Crit of Terri Tiffany's Work


Please note that the text and critique are only posted on this blog and not on a true public forum.  Next Wednesday, I'll critique again.

Laura Diamond's Critique

Here's my blog critique of Laura Diamond's sample.  Thanks to Laura for volunteering.  Feel free to add to my crit, agree with it or disagree.  Reading is subjective, and to a certain degree, so is editing.  See, I told you that was my new mantra.


Below is my detailed critique.  Please select FULL SCREEN to view, then once the document is open RIGHT CLICK to ZOOM and view the comments.

Blog Crit of TALENT'S_BLOOD by Laura Diamond


Please note that the text and critique are only posted on this blog and not on a true public forum.  Next Wednesday, I'll critique again.

Kiera Bryant's Critique

Here's my first blog critique.  Thanks to Kiera Bryant for volunteering and to Roni Griffin for helping me figure out the technical side of posting my edit.  Feel free to add to my crit, agree with it or disagree.  Reading is subjective and, to a certain degree, so is editing.  That's my new mantra.  Like it? 


Below is my detailed critique.  Please select FULL SCREEN to view, then once the document is open RIGHT CLICK to ZOOM and view the comments.


Blog Critique the Sanguine Chronicles by Kiera Bryant


Please note that the text and critique are only posted on this blog and not on a true public forum.  Next Wednesday, I'll critique again.