Wednesday, October 6, 2010

Critique of Terri Tiffany's Beginning

Here's my blog critique of Terri Tiffany's sample. Thanks to Terri for volunteering. Feel free to add to my crit, agree with it or disagree. Reading is subjective, and to a certain degree, so is editing.

Below is my detailed critique. Please select FULL SCREEN to view, then once the document is open RIGHT CLICK to ZOOM and view the comments.

Blog Crit of Terri Tiffany's Work

Please note that the text and critique are only posted on this blog and not on a true public forum.  Next Wednesday, I'll critique again.


  1. Thank you so much! I am looking forward to reading it! And I have to apologize --I never even realized you did full edits (duh) until I read your link you sent me.

  2. Lynette,
    I read through your comments! Excellent. Actually this was sort of an experiment for me. I never write in first person and wanted to give it a try. I've only done a few chapters in this version and might switch back as I can see it takes on a while new dimension. I'm printing it off now:)

  3. I agree! Just a bit more about what's going on, and it would be excellent. :)