Here's my blog critique of UNTIL THE END by Danielle Hess. Thanks to Danielle for volunteering. Feel free to add to my crit, agree with it or disagree. Reading is subjective, and to a certain degree, so is editing.
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Danielle Hess -Blog Crit of UNTIL THE END
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