Wednesday, April 13, 2011

Cherie Reich's Query Revision and Critique

Recently, I posted Cherie Reich's critiqued query letter. She has since revised it and I've critiqued it again.

Below is my detailed critique. Please select FULL SCREEN to view, then once the document is open RIGHT CLICK to ZOOM and view the comments.


Cherie Reich - Query Crit 2 of Virtuoso

Thanks to all who've volunteered to share their work on my blog. I'm a certified copyeditor and proofreader. If anyone is interested in having their query, synopsis, and/or manuscript edited, I can help. I'm also a writing coach, so I can teach you how to edit your own manuscript. One way to make query writing easier is to have a clear understanding of your main character(s)'s GMCs (goals, motivations, conflicts). If you're struggling with GMCs, I have a one-on-one class for you. I teach the GMC course at your pace and help you discover the GMCs for your book. Contact me for more information or visit my site.



Lynnette Labelle
http://www.labelleseditorialservices.com/

4 comments:

  1. Thank you so much, Lynnette. This has been so helpful, and I'm beginning to feel more confident in this query letter. :)

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  2. You're welcome, Cherie. I'm glad I could help.

    Lynnette Labelle
    www.labelleseditorialservices.com

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  3. Cherie, I think the premise of this book is really interesting. Good luck with your next revision(s). Lynnette, I agree with your points.

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  4. Thanks, Theresa.

    Lynnette Labelle
    www.labelleseditorialservices.com

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