Here's my blog critique of HIDDEN IN SHADOWS by Nicole Zoltack. Thanks to Nicole for volunteering. Feel free to add to my crit, agree with it or disagree. Reading is subjective, and to a certain degree, so is editing.
Below is my detailed critique. Please select FULL SCREEN to view, then once the document is open RIGHT CLICK to ZOOM and view the comments.
Blog Crit of Hidden in Shadows by Nicole Zoltack
The text and critique are only posted on this blog and not on a true public forum. Next Wednesday, I'll critique again.
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