Here's my first blog critique. Thanks to Kiera Bryant for volunteering and to Roni Griffin for helping me figure out the technical side of posting my edit. Feel free to add to my crit, agree with it or disagree. Reading is subjective and, to a certain degree, so is editing. That's my new mantra. Like it?
Below is my detailed critique. Please select FULL SCREEN to view, then once the document is open RIGHT CLICK to ZOOM and view the comments.
Blog Critique the Sanguine Chronicles by Kiera Bryant
Please note that the text and critique are only posted on this blog and not on a true public forum. Next Wednesday, I'll critique again.